On the 17th October it was Pet Day. We had to make a slide show to show all our writing for Pet Day. we also put on some pictures of the pet we own and other people's pets. Here is the slide show that I made. Hope you enjoy.
Hi, I am Chloe from Awahono School. I like it how you put what each piece of writing is about. But maybe next time you should look at the slide because on slide 7 there is a photo on the writing.
Hi Rawiri, It's Miro from Room 6. I really like your slideshow about your pet because you tell me a lot of what he does and about dogs in general. Maybe you could call it something related to what you talk about in it and move the photo on slide 7 because it is blocking the end of the sentence.
Hi, I am Chloe from Awahono School. I like it how you put what each piece of writing is about. But maybe next time you should look at the slide because on slide 7 there is a photo on the writing.
ReplyDeleteHi Rawiri, It's Miro from Room 6. I really like your slideshow about your pet because you tell me a lot of what he does and about dogs in general. Maybe you could call it something related to what you talk about in it and move the photo on slide 7 because it is blocking the end of the sentence.
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